tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post6618529794393740190..comments2024-03-28T11:43:48.977+05:30Comments on Here I go again..: An ode to my loveLal Jo-ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18425565289189457621noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-12635114941330937092010-02-18T20:30:37.781+05:302010-02-18T20:30:37.781+05:303rd attempt "counting every star we parse&quo...3rd attempt "counting every star we parse"...parse khi ka duh top! and i love the orange poem. "i came along, i wrote a song for u, o what a thing to do, and it was called 'yellow'" tih ringot ah poh ka luangliam theia, ka duh ang chi takin i ziakku2https://www.blogger.com/profile/16670201021888283331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-47998768502329942162009-07-30T21:30:07.459+05:302009-07-30T21:30:07.459+05:30@illusionaire - agreed. Andy also mentioned about ...@illusionaire - agreed. Andy also mentioned about the liberty of peoms, i.e art. Yeah, we are living in this world, full of art. science too is an art (me thinks) :-)<br /><br />@puii - thanks again for your inspiring comment. Not only from the heart, but deep down inside. <br /><br />@wonderboy - teh hlawl che chuan. Ka tum ngun, hla phuah pawh ka tum ngun, ka pamtrul thrak thrak mai. Hehe.. lo tum ve zel teh.<br /><br />@blackestred - I know why you loved that line. No wonder why you choose your display name 'blackest red' :-) It's nice to hear from such people, who've written at least some. Thanks again.<br /><br />@rita - Hey hey, really? I'll buy you a hanky, some other time. lol. Really appreciate your comment.Lal Jo-ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18425565289189457621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-30307966995543695612009-07-29T23:57:35.150+05:302009-07-29T23:57:35.150+05:30Nope You've not failed... (I melted) only thin...Nope You've not failed... (I melted) only thing is the poem is not for me :-( Any normal would fell for it.. keep it up and thumbs up!!Rita Zoyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15197123216913768424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-54449587186345039702009-07-27T23:37:13.803+05:302009-07-27T23:37:13.803+05:30Nice work.. "Crimson regret here I cry.."...Nice work.. "Crimson regret here I cry.." nice line there.. <br />At one time, my mind was full of rhymes and I did post a few, but now I'm blank. I guess it just doesn't come that easy.<br />Keep rhyming, you'll only get better, there's no wrong way to write a poem, IMHO.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-16271324051083133162009-07-27T14:07:25.732+05:302009-07-27T14:07:25.732+05:30ziak thiam khop alom....khitiang bak2 a tha a awm ...ziak thiam khop alom....khitiang bak2 a tha a awm lo sim2....keep going!!!<br />poem hi chu vawi khat chiah ka la ziak ve a, ka tum leh duh to lo reng2.... :-)wonderboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00435220002557689328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-11932466197331638832009-07-27T10:58:16.006+05:302009-07-27T10:58:16.006+05:30Hey, I think you actually wrote the poems pretty w...Hey, I think you actually wrote the poems pretty well specially the last one :)!! As for me.. I really suck when i've to come up with poetic words and writing a poem itself!! I think when one write something from ones heart, it's always such a beautiful thing for that person! so... keep writing from your heart for the one :)Puiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04984165700149153832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-57379985291024607132009-07-26T00:20:54.369+05:302009-07-26T00:20:54.369+05:30There's no such thing as failure in poetry. Th...There's no such thing as failure in poetry. The greatest thing about poetry is it is freestyle :-) Look at all the so called "great poems" we have. It is the only educated few in this field that appreciates them. And does that make such poems any superior? Well, if we are talking about what the majority likes and not what a few selective people who consider it to be intellectually beyond our level of thinking, then I suppose majority counts. After all, that's how a political party comes to power too, right? :-)Mizohicanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09644240783333879705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-2856684497144102802009-07-21T06:50:13.097+05:302009-07-21T06:50:13.097+05:30This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-65041241798186598572009-07-21T00:07:36.747+05:302009-07-21T00:07:36.747+05:30@mnowluck - U should try.. atleast once. :-) It ma...@mnowluck - U should try.. atleast once. :-) It may be your hidden talent.Lal Jo-ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18425565289189457621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-6590655304475062492009-07-19T15:55:06.047+05:302009-07-19T15:55:06.047+05:30Nice one.. I hadn't dare to try even once.:)Nice one.. I hadn't dare to try even once.:)mnowluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12378013983432242882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-60991075910509272009-07-16T17:20:47.497+05:302009-07-16T17:20:47.497+05:30@Chhangte - I rawn lut ve leh thin a, i ti lawmawm...@Chhangte - I rawn lut ve leh thin a, i ti lawmawm thin. Nangni ang mithiam comment hi kan ngaihthlak chak a ni thin a nia. :-) Lo ti tlauh tlauh ila a ni mai alawm... btw, i fapa hi ka kid atan ka va awt ve. A cute ltk<br /><br />@Varte - In ti tha duh si lo a, keini hian thiamlo chung chungin kan han risk kual ve leh thin a ni e.Lal Jo-ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18425565289189457621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-59953971397427693742009-07-16T17:17:34.818+05:302009-07-16T17:17:34.818+05:30Nice try, keep on trying till you make it.. te han...Nice try, keep on trying till you make it.. te han ti vel ilah..<br /><br />Kei ai chuan i thiam hrim hrim a nih hi.Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03938002063402686951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-29228168532644436422009-07-16T12:24:19.721+05:302009-07-16T12:24:19.721+05:30Poetry hi chu Robert Frost, William Wadsworth, Lor...Poetry hi chu Robert Frost, William Wadsworth, Lord Alfred Tennyson leh midang dang te bâk hi ka la kalpel lo reng reng :D Lo ti tlauh tlauh teh khai.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00986277692104667305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-58160594815282349482009-07-16T02:25:10.660+05:302009-07-16T02:25:10.660+05:30@Mimi - I must say thank you. I thought i really s...@Mimi - I must say thank you. I thought i really screwed up my poems, esp the final attempt. And thanks again, for your inspiring comment. You will be a great poet, if you tried... I can see through the future, I know, I got crystal balls. lol<br /><br />@Andy - Yesss, and I came to know that, there exist 'poetic license' :-) . Seriously guys, my 3rd attempt was just a wrapped up, i never thought people will like it.<br /><br />Thanks again buddy, for you've let my poetic soul run spree from doubts. Btw, my 'love' can read this from Imagination Land. :-)Lal Jo-ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18425565289189457621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-2859855712474476092009-07-16T01:36:28.850+05:302009-07-16T01:36:28.850+05:30Aha! But I must insist, there is no failure when i...Aha! But I must insist, there is no failure when it comes to writing 'em poems. That is the beauty of the arts, there is no rigid standard upon which one must be judged - you are free to express yourself!<br /><br />I enjoyed the 3rd 'attempt' - 'attempt' ti lovin 'format' ti zawk ang - 'attempt' sounds too unflattering.<br /><br />All you need to do now is let your 'love' read this! :DAndy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8111788090634902046.post-40474927258627758012009-07-15T21:40:47.277+05:302009-07-15T21:40:47.277+05:30No! You did not fail..
You tried.. and it's no...No! You did not fail..<br />You tried.. and it's not bad at all.. i like the third one :-)<br />And i seriously want to know how to compose poems too. Maybe, just maybe, someday.. it might happen.<br /><br />Bravo for this one.. keep it up!Mimihrahselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09935617884145710079noreply@blogger.com